Friday, March 6, 2009

Walter


I think Walter cant run the business because i think he doesnt know how to run on. He just wants to get money to get better stuff for his family. I think that if he goes into the business, it wont flourish and he will end up in debt and will end up being even more poor than before.

Thursday, February 26, 2009

Tuesday, February 24, 2009

$ 10,000

I think the ten thousand dollars should go to getting a bigger house. If they get a bigger house, then they can have more rooms for each person. Beneatha and Mama wont have to sleep in the same bed any more, Travis would have his own room and wont have to sleep in the living room anymore. Also, if they get a bigger house, they wont be so cramped. They could have more than one bathroom, bigger kitchen, and a bigger living room. They could improve all their appliances in the kitchen, bigger and more comftorable furniture, and better beds. Thats why I think they should spend the money on a new house.

Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Abandoned Cabin








I Was following a worn down road into the woods, when I stumbled upon an old car. The car had broken windows, no tires, and it was rusted all over its frame. I continued down the road and I eventually found a cabin. The cabin had rotted wood on its roof, sections of the front door missing, and the deck was split in half. I walked up the creaky front steps and pushed the broken door open.

Chapter 2: Inside



When I stepped inside, I went over to the light switch and flipped it to the on position. When I flipped it on, the lights went on for five seconds and then exploded like fireworks. I went over to the dusty cabinets and searched them for a flashlight. I eventually found one under the old kitchen sink. When I picked it up, it was rough from all the rust on it. I turned it on and found that everything in the cabin was covered in dust and cobwebs. I walked over to the old, dirt-stained fridge and when I opened it, it squeaked like a mouse. The fridge still had some food in it. I picked up a soft apple and smelled it. It smelled like an armpit. I don’t know why, but I bit into it and it tasted like an old pair of socks. I put the apple back and walked over to a door which seemed to lead to a bathroom. When I walked in there, and I immediately smelled like someone or something died in there. I went back to the main room and found some stairs to the second floor and went up them.
Chapter 3: Upstairs
When I walked upstairs, I found two old beds with tears in the mattress and sheets. I went over to the closet and opened it to only find old shirts and coats with moth balls in them. I kept searching in the closet and stumbled upon a half-eaten box. I looked inside it to find dusty pictures of people. I was guessing that these people used to own this cabin. In the pictures, there was an old, bald man and an old, gray haired woman. I walked back down stairs and went out the back door. The area in the back had debris littered all over the place. There were wheels stuck half way in the ground, the fence had big gaps and holes in it, and it looked like some animal had made a nest here. I walked over to it and it smelled like a rotting carcass. It was getting dark, so I decided to go back to the main road, and get back to civilization.

Friday, February 13, 2009

Gamertag

If you have an X-box 360 and have live, add me to your friends if you want to play Gears 2, Left 4 Dead, or Chromehounds. Gamer tag: WOWLOVER111. If you have chrome hounds, clans name is SPLFS.

Wednesday, February 11, 2009